Getting in trouble

In this piece of writing I am avoiding getting into trouble with using personal voice

Getting in trouble

We were going to the dump to drop off some rubbish and

then go to the pet store to get some fish.

We stopped off at my dad's uncle's car shop and had a

talk to him.I asked my dad if i could stay in the car with his

phone he said sure you can.He came back and he grained  

my brother and sister they were in a lot of trouble.We went to

the pet store and i brought a fish the other two were not

allowed to buy a fish.We went back home to drop off the fish

and put it in the tank we went to go drop off some hey at

Someone's house. Then we came back home and auntie and

uncle came over.They took us to the warehouse to buy some

stuff. I bought a scooter my brother and sister brought Lego.

We went back home and they stayed the night when we

were going to bed we heard a mouse but it was actually a rat.

My auntie and uncle put it in a cage until the morning we

found it. I live in the morning in the cage. My brother

picked it up and brought it into my dad's room he got into

trouble he brought it back into my dad's room and then he

put it into the cage and put it out side for the rest of the day. After

school We let it go into the bushes at our house .We look

there a couple of days later and  

it and it was gone we were so happy it survived.